On thursday we had to show our experimental narrative ideas, it went really well, people seemed to like my idea but gave great suggestions which I will take into consideration when developing my idea.
I was told to have another look at Vertov’s Man with a movie camera because he explores the camera as an eye.
Also someone suggested using a mix of film and animation.
After this feedback I kept on coming up with ideas, to reinforce the eye being a modified eye I could use the sound of a machine when it blinks, or a shutter sound from a camera?
And my main focus point from now on is the orgmentation of the human body, biomechanics and how technology can improve the human body.
This is what I will spend the next week or so researching and developing 🙂